Peer Feedback

Western Project: Interim 1 Peer Feedback

This is the first peer feedback for our interim deadline, my contextual and theme research was completed, although there were certain aspects missing for my audience research. For the duration of this time to my deadline, I will continue adding to my audience research, and improving annotation so that its more detailed and in-depth within the project. 

Western Project: Interim 2  Peer Feedback

During this interim deadline, my work process slowed down as I struggled to gain the perspective of how I wanted my Western diorama layout to look. For further improvement to improve my grade and remove referrals, would be to add more block-outs, as this would give me the correct perspective I need, as well as ensuring that I can clearly layout my overall sketch and concept designs. 

Western Project: Interim 3 Peer Feedback 

Looking at my third peer feedback, a lot of my work was not written up on the blog by this point, which meant a couple of my sections were referred. Something I need to focus more on, is keeping on track with the development of my work as I progress, and ensuring i’m recording in on my development log, and representing my design processes. Here I began ensuring all the portfolio research was completed, as well as my UCAS statement which is now fully recorded on my blog.